Am writing a science fiction novel about mexico?

do you think it good. in 2014, mexico is experimenting with wormholes , teleaportion and parallel dimensions.but 2 japanese terrorists excape from a reseach center.theatens the secret program.in order to keep it secret.a colonel and 232 prisoner soldiers are send to arrest them in a near by island.but Mr. Ninja and his army of clones have other plans in store for them.